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Posted by: John Gould at 4:56PM PST on August 13, 2010
Mind set free in the Dharma-realm,
I sit at the moon-filled window
Watching the mountains with my ears,
Hearing the stream with open eyes.
Each molecule preaches perfect law,
Each moment chants true sutra:
The most fleeting thought is timeless,
A single hair’s enough to stir the sea.
-- SHUTAKU
From The Penguin Book of Zen Poetry, Poems of the Japanese Zen Masters
Up in the John Muir Wilderness—at 12,000 feet. With nothing to do but rest my aching legs and watch a hailstorm roll in over the glacier divide.
I missed my last blog post and took this picture. Sat in the tent and read the one dog-eared book that made the weight cut for my pack.
Luckily, having little to say back at sea level, it would miss the point to say anything else about this poem. Next week, Haiku.
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J Gould has
been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was
one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out
at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the
spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and
toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and
publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: EnviroChuck at 12:11PM PST on July 19, 2010
Almost any turn of the kaleidascope of nature may set up in the artist a detached and esthetic vision, and, as he contemplates the particular field of vision, the (esthetically) chaotic and accidental contemplation of forms and colours begins to crystallize into a harmony; and, as this harmony becomes clear to the artist, his actual vision becomes distorted by the emphasis of the rhythm that is set up within him.
--John Dewey, quoting Roger Fry, in Art as Experience
I think this is as good an entry into Whitman as any, and, for me, Walt needs some kind of entry point. Launching into the tomb that is Leaves of Grass is dizzying, and I need to be reminded that chaos, distortion, accidental contemplation are part and parcel of the poetic experience.
The 1008-page Norton Critical Edition survives, waterlogged and dog-eared, on the bottom of the bookshelf, where books that all self-respecting poets, have but rarely have the guts to open, are kept. It feels like an indulgence, a long enough journey to require water and snacks, to sit down with the thing on my lap, intending to read and return the better for having done so.
But here is Whitman at his best--out in the natural world, the "harmony becomes clear" :
Done with indoor complaints, libraries, querulous criticisms,
Strong and content I travel the open road.
The earth, that is sufficient,
I do not want the constellations any nearer,
I know they are very well where they are,
I know they suffice for those who belong to them.
(Still here I carry my old delicious burdens,
I carry them, men and women, I carry them with me wherever I go,
I swear it is impossible for me to get rid of them,
I'm fill'd with them, and I will fill them in return.
He is driven by a strong sense of belonging and, out of that, a heightened sense of duty--to go beyond what binds and falsely defines him. Maintaining his ties to the community of human beings by returning with something that has been lost.
As the editors note in the Introduction, "...It is important to emphasize that Walt Whitman knew what he was doing and that, when all is said and done--like every artist who achieves something, Walt Whitman ruminated, twisted, lived, willed his something...."
"Loos'd of all limits and imaginary lines," Whitman's "something," the rhythm that he finds at work in the world, "distorts" his vision in ways that become clear in his poetic acts. He "knows" what he is doing only in that he allows this distortion to take place. He willingly accepts his re-birth, wholeheartedly.
Wisdom is of the soul, is not susceptible of proof, is its own proof,
Applies to all stages and objects and qualities and is content,
Is the certainty of the reality and immortality of things, and the
excellence of things;
Something there is in the float of the sight of things that provokes
it out of the soul.
What Whitman brings back is something he knows is foreign. "I will be honest with you," he warns, "I do not offer the old smooth prizes, but offer rough new prizes."
But it is his base delight at having been released from the old way of seeing that gives integrity to the relentless stream of consciousness that connects a child's question, "What is the grass?" to Whitman's simple, indulgent answer, "I guess it must be the flag of my disposition, out of hopeful green / stuff woven."
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 10:30PM PST on July 8, 2010

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Under the water tower at the edge of town
A huge Airedale ponders a long ripple
In the grass fields beyond.
Miles off, a whole grove silently
Flies up into the darkness.
One light comes on in the sky,
One lamp on the prairie.
—James Wright, Above the River: the Complete Poems
Wright was as much at home in Ohio as he was making his way as a poet in defiance of the life his father had chosen, the small town, his life’s work at Hazel-Atlas Glass. He saw through part of his life, enough to write from the pauses inherent in its structure.
He wrote about the forgotten people, the ugliness in people, about football and “the sons [who] grow suicidally beautiful / at the beginning of October, / and gallop terribly against each other’s bodies."
But he also wrote about nature, the pastoral, human connection to the natural rhythms of life: one light, one horse, the prairie. He paused long enough in the silence created by this kind of seeing to create poetry that the critics said, “expressed and enacted compassion over the world’s suffering.”
Reading Wright, I have more compassion for the man who worked with these images. A man who was honest and accurate in the images he created. And, one senses, genuinely vulnerable to the sadness and the beauty he encountered.
Mary Oppen, in Meaning A Life: an Autobiography, wrote about the “objectivist” poet’s point of view (in relation to conversations with Louis Zukowski and her husband George Oppen) about the critical attempt to “construct meaning, to construct a method of thought from the imagist intensity of vision.” She quotes from an interview with George in 1969:
If no one were going to challenge me, I would say “a test of truth.” If I had to back it up I’d day anyway, “a test of sincerity—that there is a moment, an actual time, when you believe something to be true, and you construct a meaning from these moments of conviction.
For both Wright and Oppen, these moments often came in the intersection of the human and natural worlds—in the space created there. Something to push off of, in either direction, that gives being dimension. The one more image, the other more object—the distinction is arguably relevant to poetics. It also adds a layer of meaning to the consideration of these two poems:
Arriving in the Country Again (Wright):
The white house is silent.
My friends can’t hear me yet.
The flicker who lives in the bare tree at the field’s edge
Pecks once and is still for a long time.
I stand in the late afternoon.
My face is turned away from the sun.
A horse grazes in my long shadow.
From Latitude, Longitude (Oppen)
climbed up from the road and found
over the flowers at the mountain’s
rough top a bee yellow
and heavy as
pollen in the mountainous
air thin legs crookedly
a-dangle if we could
find all
the gale’s evidence what message
is there for us in these
glassy bottles….
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 11:20AM PST on June 24, 2010
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From "Riprap":
Cry, barb, tooth, howls,
carnivorous nothingness, its turbulence,
all disappear before this simple flower.
--Octavio Paz, Early Poems: 1935-1955
To get back to something we started a few weeks ago with Gary Snyder -- his Riprap and Cold Mountain Poems. Trail crews in Yosemite. The "real work" of writing and working hard. The beat scene in San Francisco. And a discernment that grew out of Zen practice in Japan.
How different from the life and writing here, from Paz, emerging from the Civil War in Spain, working with "pain as speech." As fellow Mexican poet Ramon Xirau wrote, "Paz seems to have set out in search of the most desperate experience in order to emerge from it with at least a grain of hope."
rip·rap
Etymology: obsolete riprap sound of rapping
Date: 1833
1: a foundation or sustaining wall of stones or chunks of concrete thrown together without order (as in deep water); also: a layer of this or similar material on an embankment slope to prevent erosion.
Words stacked upon words. Eroding the traditional semantic process, and at the same time creating lasting meaning...something true to the landscape of experience. Paz's short pieces in this poem, expanding on each other, revealing the basic structure of hope that overwhelm and despair dissolve into. The structure of nature.
From "Reasons for Dying":
Some spoke of our land.
But I thought of a poor earth,
people of dust and light,
a street and a wall
and a silent man up against a wall.
And those stones in the clear upland sun
and light standing naked in the river ...
forgotten things that feed my memory,
irrelevant things, not summoned up,
dreams of a dream, those sudden presences
with which time tells us that we have no being,
that time is the one who remembers and who dreams.
There is no country, there is earth and its images,
Dust and light living in time.
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 11:32PM PST on June 16, 2010

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Phenomenologically, then, Brahman is affirmed by the Advaitin as that fullness of being which enlightens and is joy. It has its basis for him [her] in experience (anubhava), not in mere speculation; and the experience, which is enduring for one who attains it, is the goal of human life.
—Advaita Vedãnta: a Philosophical Reconstruction, Eliot Deutsch
Even the sound of the wind chimes outside the door of my teacher’s house, on Thursday nights—my breath relaxes. I notice the wind on my arm, the trees moving. And I sink down into myself with each step, her voice through the open window.
Experience changes clothes. Becomes more light. The consciousness of being alive, reflected in other living things.
The cleansing power of voice, of language. I’m re-reading W.S. Merwin’s The Book of Fables. And out of recollection comes the following lines from “A Tree”:
As I was a child I heard the voices rising. I sat by a wall. It was afternoon already, facing west, near a tree, and I had heard them before. All the roots of the earth reach blindly toward mouths that are awaiting to say them.
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 11:53PM PST on June 9, 2010

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“It’s a lyric reaction to the world,” says George Oppen (1908-1984), “a sense of awe, simply to feel that the thing is there and that it’s quite something to see.” Casual as it sounds, this bracing view goes to the core of modern American poetry. William Carlos Williams had reawakened us to “the New World that rises to our windows” every day:
Now the grass, tomorrow
the stiff curl of wildcarrot leaf
One by one objects are defined—
It quickens…
—John Felstiner, Can Poetry Save the Earth: A Field Guide to Nature Poems
This reflection on British and American poets came out last year—and if you knew about it, and you read this blog, you might be wondering why, with a title like that, I’ve never mentioned it.
Well, I just saved up enough in my poetry budget to buy the frickin’ thing ($35), for one, and direct commentary on poetry is always behind poetry on its own, and criticism/philosophy in general—on my list.
But this is too close to the bone of what we’re dealing with here—so I’m going to throw a few pieces in, from time to time. And you can decide for yourself. It does cover a lot of ground.
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 2:58PM PST on May 28, 2010
Neither beautify nor uglify. Do not denature.
—Robert Bresson, Notes on the Cinematographer, Green Integer 2
So Saturday, the boys and I are coming into Yosemite on Hwy 120, sleet off and on, about 35 degrees, and a deer flashes across the road within feet of the front bumper. There’s another, down, in the road, barely lifting it’s head, one eye rolling back.
“Holy crap!” Peter (13) yells from the back seat. There are no visible marks on the animal. No car with a bent grill. We idle dangerously on the curve in the road. CRASH!
The biggest coyote I’ve ever seen jumps onto the road from the bank and grabs the deer’s neck in its jaws. Shaking it.
*#*##$%$#*!! Andrew (15).
Nature is savage. Marlin Perkins never had it better—in the middle of the road! Readers of this blog are lucky there were other cars coming and my efforts to back up to get a photo were thwarted—“Dad, you’re going to kill us!”
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It is easier to feel than to realize, or in any way explain, Yosemite grandeur. The magnitudes of the rocks and trees and streams are so delicately harmonized they are mostly hidden.
—John Muir, The Yosemite, My first Summer in the Sierra
My car is a mess, not withstanding the window made out of packing tape that resulted from a black bear bending my doorframe down to the ground last fall. Apparently, they really will break into your car for a tube of sunscreen. Amidst the rubble and remaining glass shards, an old journal from a Half Dome trip in 2001:
The yawning breadth of the Sierras
and that’s enough. That’s why
we came here my brother and I
in November after the first snow.
People gone the cables
down for the season
no common-sense reason
to be here. Only the fluttering
of a pack in the wind
to mark the ascent,
the lonely pace of a raven
following from camp bringing news
of an alien planet.
…
After a day of bouldering near Camp 4, the boys and I huddle around a gathered-wood fire and watch the climbers sort gear by headlamp. What sounds like thunder— reverberating through the camp—is really a rock-fall. People from all over the world come here because they are drawn to adventure, to something that exists nowhere else.
As for poets, Gary Snyder found his Yosemite inspiration in trail crew work, as his Zen training might suggest. We’ll end with this meditation with a piece from “Riprap” :
In the thin loam, each rock a word
a creek-washed stone
Granite: ingrained
with torment of fire and weight
Crystal and sediment linked hot
all change in thoughts
As well as things.
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 10:19PM PST on May 19, 2010

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Monet and Renior and Degas believed that sight was simply the sum of its light. In their pretty paintings they wanted to describe the fleeting photons absorbed by the eye, to describe nature entirely in terms of its illumination. But Cézanne believed that light was only the beginning of seeing. “The eye is not enough,” he declared. “One needs to think as well.” Cézanne’s epiphany was that our impressions require interpretation; to look is to create what you see.
—Jonah Lehrer, Proust Was a Neuroscientist
If the impressionists were “just not strange enough” for Cézanne, as Lehrer writes, and his postimpressionism was a recognition of the abstract nature of reality and the subjective process of meaning-making that creates our view of the world, then any authentic art has to create space.
What a perfect entryway into post-modern “nature” poetry, which in my mind is less about “images” of nature and more about the interpretation of experience. The nature we are really after, the animal our heart yearns to discern, is more there when we pull back from the focus of the lens.
Before I moved in with a poet—her books, and more importantly, her thoughts. When my repertoire consisted primarily of Snyder, Berry, and Hass. I remember being unaffected by much of what was being written by poets of my own generation. It seemed either inaccessible, or not interesting.
The fact that I was wrong on both accounts is lucky. And so began a letting go of my own personal strangle hold on poetry. Take Cole Swensen’s excerpts from “Nine Trees” in Noon:
One after one
what paces
within
destroys all sound
and the glass
on the surface of the lake,
the scratch and the
listening skin
and
Grey now and the shift
is bare
where winter or—
and tall, no
stare out the window
like there was something there
What was disconcerting, foreign to me, is still foreign here. Maybe it’s my Buddhist leanings toward an acceptance of groundlessness, but the space I encounter in these poems is now more engaging and alive than it is problematic. Life is a struggle, and the purpose of poetry is to engage us in that struggle, not shy away from it.
Comprehension, be it through the image of a tree, or the verbal rendering of it in poetry, needs blurred edges to convey a sense of our reality as movement, constantly changing. Nothing is static, not even meaning. The “real work,” as Snyder put it, is in the making.
And here is the perfect exit, from this particular workspace, from John Ashbery’s Three Poems:
It is necessary to go forward completing
The gesture from the beginning of life
That was worrying its shape into the trees
All this time, as though that shape were responsible
For the many fluctuating situations that fill the air.
—from “The New Spirit”
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 11:47PM PST on May 13, 2010

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What is man in nature? Nothing in relation to the infinite, everything in relation to nothing, a mean between nothing and everything.
—Blaise Pascal, Pensées
Okay, so if you’re following along from last week, after the light interlude of Farley Mowat peeing out his territory among the wolves, I pick up Charles Seife’s book Zero: The Biography of a Dangerous Idea and return to more serious matters.
It turns out that Pascal helped invent probability theory, at first to put more money in the pockets of aristocratic gamblers, but then he had an “intense spiritual experience” that turned him theologian. Nothing like an encounter with paradox, with the complexity of existence, to alchemize the pursuit of scientific truth into the acceptance of groundlessness.
Poets play with this potential all the time. The physical object, the image, the signified, the unpinable locus of meaning. The wisdom and neurosis of spiritual devotion. The seemingly spiritual experience of awe in the face of natural phenomena.
A few lines from Robert Duncan:
That Freedom and the Law are identical
And are the nature of Man—Paradise….
It is as if I were moving towards
the wastes of water all living things remember the world to be,
the law of me
going under the wave….
and Anne Carson:
To hear how God was moving through the universe
gave Isaac his question.
I could tell you his answer
But it wouldn’t help.
And Fanny Howe:
Let it snow unless it is in heaven
Let it know
What it is itself that waterstuff
As it covers the silver
Winter dinner bell.
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 9:34PM PST on May 5, 2010

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Like an external absence, like a sudden bell,
the sea spreads the sound of the heart,
raining, at nightfall, on a lonely coast:
night doubtless falls,
and its mournful, shipwrecked-banner blue
peoples itself with planets of hoarse silver.
—Paublo Neruda, from “Barcarole” in Residence on Earth
After last week’s descent into the “other,” I’m still reeling, still sitting on the bank of that river waiting for the experience of nature to clean me out, the alchemy to transform my mood. Yet here I am with Neruda. Vacillating in the spaces between the “lonely coast” and “planets of hoarse silver.” The “external absence” still the most prominent feature.
But Neruda’s poem is moving. The melancholy is not static, like the tone that pervades Mathew Arnold’s famous lines from “Dover Beach”:
The Sea of Faith
Was once, too, at the full, and round earth’s shore
Lay like the folds of a bright girdle furl’d.
But now I only hear
Its melancholy, long, withdrawing roar,
Retreating, to the breath
Of the night-wind, down the vast edges drear
And naked shingles of the world.
Arnold’s sea is, by nature now, a sorrowful force. More than an “external absence” it is an active agent of sadness he perceives acting on him. It is only by resisting this nature, by turning “to one another” that he can survive the reality of his existence on a “darkling plain.”
Neruda’s tone is more contemplative, finding some internal witness that notices how nature contains within its mourning the birth of beauty and potential. It is more his own alienation from nature that causes pain.
From “Ritual of my Legs:
Always,
manufactured products, socks, shoes,
or simply infinite air,
there will be between my fee and the earth
stressing the isolated and solitary part of my being,
something tenaciously involved between my life and the earth,
something openly unconquerable and unfriendly.
Susan notices, over my shoulder, the continuing obsession with nature’s dark side. As I’m reaching for Zero: The Biography of a Dangerous Idea, she gently suggests I reconnoiter with the wolf book I have shoved in my shoulder bag. When all else fails, the male psyche can relax and enjoy a good adventure story, and the never-fails-to-raise-the-spirits mention of peeing in the woods. This one from Farley Mowat takes it to a new level, describing the ritual marking of his own little camp territory within the 400 square miles demarcated by a resident wolf pack:
Staking out the land turned out to be rather more difficult than I had anticipated. In order to ensure that my claim would not be overlooked, I felt obliged to make a property mark on stones, clumps of moss, and patches of vegetation at intervals of not more than fifteen feet around the circumference of my claim. This took most of the night and required frequent returns to the tent to consume copious quantities of tea; but before dawn brought the hunters home the task was done, and I returned, somewhat exhausted, to observe the results.
From “Good Old Uncle Albert” in Wolf Songs
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 11:48PM PST on April 28, 2010
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The word comes along out of the mountain every once in a while to chill me.
Undercurrent of an unwillingness to believe all
is well in early spring beside a molten river riven by sun,…
—Emily Warn, from The Word, in Poetry, April 2010
A few years ago I was in the Yosemite high country. One of my favorite places. I sat by the Tuolumne River, in the shadows of the granite walls—no place be, other than right there. Feet in the water, feeling the wind on my bare chest. Alone with my thoughts. And that’s exactly how I felt: alone.
I have been in the mountains by myself enough times to know the contemplation that feeds on itself. The moods that follow me into the woods like shadows. Warn’s word is my word, especially since I’ve gotten older. That word, and others like it, flow from the environment as easily as the indomitable lightness that Muir writes about after a night behind the falls, moon-bows and a near-death pummeling, waking the next morning “better, not worse, for my hard midnight bath.”
Philippe Lacoue-Labarthe gets at it in a piece called “Pain” in Poetry as Experience, quoting Heidegger’s On the Way to Language:
To undergo an experience with something—be it a thing, a person, a god—means that this something befalls us, strikes us, comes over us, overwhelms and transforms us. When we talk of “undergoing” an experience, we mean specifically that the experience is not of our own making; to undergo here means that we endure it, suffer it, receive it as it strikes us and submit to it.
And a few pages later, in Ecstasy, quoting Jean-Jacques Rousseau’s Reveries:
Night was coming on. I saw the sky, some stars, and a few leaves. This first sensation was a moment of delight. I was conscious of nothing else. In this instant I was being born again, and it seemed as if all I perceived was filled with my frail existence. Entirely taken up by the present, I could remember nothing.
Encountering nature on its own terms is not a mild or particularly calming experience. Inhab
iting that space can be a kind of suffering, a submitting to going inside, with whatever is waiting for us there. It can also be a release, beyond the realm of our selves. But the experience itself is always “other.”
Death as the “pro-spect of the gift of birth,” a birth of the world itself—one Paul Celan calls “perceiving.”
Who
says that everything died for us
when our eyes broke?
Everything awakened, everything began.
Great, a sun came drifting, bright
a soul and a soul confronted it, clear,
masterfully their silence mapped out
an orbit for the sun.
—from Poems of Paul Celan
 
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 10:58PM PST on April 21, 2010
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You are the pickly pear
You are the sudden violent storm
the torrent to raise the river
to float the wounded doe
—Lorine Niedecker, from “Wilderness,” in Collected Works, University of California Press, 2002.
In 1971, six days after Niedecker’s death, the Wisconsin state journal published a letter from British poet Basil Bunting, which stated, “…[she] will be remembered long and warmly in England, a country she never visited. She was, in the estimation of many, the most interesting woman poet America has yet produced.”
She slept with a pencil under her pillow, ready to catch lines of poetry that flowed through her consciousness in a steady stream, day and night. She was drawn to the objectivist poets (Reznikoff, Oppen, and Zukofsky—with whom she had a relationship and a 35-year correspondence) because their verse had an affinity with her own writing, but she embraced her own Surrealist tendencies. She was not a follower.
On the 100th anniversary of her birth, her Paean to Place, handwritten in a small, square autograph book, was published—one hand-written stanza per page—to celebrate her life and her poetry. Two of these follow, necessitating my own rough guesses at a few words, which made the reading all the more satisfying.
Her simple and easy relationship with the natural world, and the way she assimilated that relationship into her work, is evident here. Something solid and unassuming that is worth coming back to.
I was the solitary plover
a pencil
for a wing-bone
from the secret notes
I must tilt
upon the pressure
execute and adjust
In us sea-air rhythm
‘We live by the urgent wave
of the verse’
 
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
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“Snow composed of water is black despite our eyes.” [Anaxagoras] Indeed what credit would snow deserve for being white if its matter were not black, if it did not come from the depths of its hidden being to crystallize into its whiteness? The will to be white is not given to a ready-made color, which has only to be kept as it is. Material imagination, which always has a demiurgic tonality, would create all white matter from dark matter and overcome the entire history of blackness. These expressions may seem gratuitous or false to clear thought. But the reverie of material intimacy does not follow the laws of denotative thought.
-- Gaston Bachelard, from The Secret of Milk: an example of imaginative synthesis, in On Poetics: Imagination and Reverie, 1987
So what has all this got to do with nature and poetry?
Not to get too heady about the whole thing, but the force conveyed, embodied by even the simplest poem -- one that is any good -- owes its existence to this “reverie of material intimacy.” To something inherent in the way our minds comprehend the world, to something woven into our being, but somehow independent of and beyond rational thought.
From Keats’s “Bright Star, would I were steadfast as thou art”:
Like Nature’s patient, sleepless eremite,
The moving waters at their priestlike task
Of pure ablution round earth’s human shores,
Or gazing on the new soft-fallen mask
Of snow upon the mountains and the moors;
How’s that, again? What does poetry do that makes us pause the way we do in nature? Words are words, description. And image is just a recounting of sorts, a facsimile, unless it isn’t. Unless it has space within it and around it. Unless it has “mobility” in Bachelard’s way of looking at it. And poetry is as much about the space, about what isn’t being said, as it is about what’s there.
The heart of the experience is what poetry points at but never touches. It’s the knowing smile that spreads across my face when I’m spread out, exhausted, below the upper falls in March. The vapor of winter snow melt just releasing itself into the unexpected warm afternoon. The cascading echo of barely liquid water hitting the slowly shrinking ice cone 2,000 feet below, and the veils of mist sweeping across the chamber of granite.
That moment of inhalation, of fullness, cannot be captured, but the force of it can inhabit the act of reading a poem. We can choose to engage in that experience.
From H.D.’s “The Walls Do Not Fall”:
I sense my own limit,
my shell-jaws snap shut
at invasion of the limitless,
ocean-weight; infinite water
can not crack me, egg in egg-shell;
closed in, complete, immortal
full-circle, I know the pull
of the tide, the lull
as well as the moon;
  
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J Gould has
been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was
one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at
Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the
spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and
toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and
publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at
Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend
J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet
others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 12:17PM PST on March 19, 2010

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If you're looking for poems, poems, articles, books, blog posts, and other resources on a particular theme, check out this great tool on the Poetry Foundation's website.
For this post, here's what I did: Search -- by Category / Nature / Seas, Rivers, Estuaries, Streams
It tells me there are 370 Poems -- says who? 184 about Winter. 2,961 about the Cycle of Life.
Well, I’m not going to look a gift horse in the mouth at 10 p.m. before my blog deadline. And neither should you. Put those charitable dollars at the Poetry Foundation to work. Pick a category, or a first line. And go.
This is the real deal -- no cheesy selection of out-of-print, remainder, never-heard of her/him poems on the Internet. And it’s easy. You don’t have to tell anyone you didn’t pour through a bunch of weighty volumes to find it.
Here are snippets of the first few I clicked on.
A Cave of Angelfish Huddle Against the Moon
by Ron De Maris
Put an ear to the light at fall
of dark and you will hear
nothing. This pale luminescence
that drifts in upon them
makes a blue bole of their caves,
a scare of their scything
tails…
As I Ebb’d with the Ocean of Life
by Walt Whitman
I perceive I have not really understood any thing, not a single object, and that no man ever can,
Nature here in sight of the sea taking advantage of me to dart upon me and sting me,
Because I have dared to open my mouth to sing at all.
Burning Island
by Gary Snyder
Who wavers right now in the bamboo:
a half-gone waning moon.
drank down a bowlful of shochu
in praise of Antares
gazing far up the lanes of Sagittarius
richest stream of our sky—
a cup to the center of the galaxy!
and let the eyes stray
right-angling the pitch of the Milky Way:
horse-heads rings
clouds too distant to be
slide free.
on the crest of the wave.
“Birds small enough...”
by Donald Revell
And the physician who brought me
Drowned under sail next day in a calm sea
There are birds small enough to live forever
Where the mind ends and where
My love and I once planted a cypress
Which is God to us
Try it. See what you find. And share it here.
  
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 9:35AM PST on March 12, 2010

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…The good life, the thing wanted for itself, the aesthetic, will be defined outside of anybody’s politics, or defined wrongly. William Stafford ends a poem titled "Vocation" (he is speaking of the poet's vocation) with the line: "Your job is to find what the world is trying to be." … And the younger poets’ judgment of society is, in the words of Robert Duncan, “I mean, of course, that happiness itself is a forest in which we are bewildered, run wild, or dwell like Robin Hood, outlawed and at home.
-- George Oppen, “The Mind’s Own Place,” Spring 1962, George Oppen Selected Poems
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This is a well-know essay by one of my favorite poets. A poetics that bears fruit in the continual discovery of ourselves in the natural world, and in the reading and re-reading of poems.
What the world is trying to be, intimates a force that is, on the surface, much more purposeful than evolution. It leans toward a master plan, yearning for completion. Survival, passing on the capacity for a better life, is a result of chance.
Somewhere in the folds of an ever-ripening natural order, however, is the aesthetic, Klee’s storehouse of power, awe. And how do we access, communicate this? Tangentially, through poetry.
From selected poems in the William Stafford Newsletter:
So now I know why people worship, carry around magic emblems, wake up talking dreams
they teach to their children: the world speaks.
The world speaks everything to us.
It is our only friend.
In Duncan, we find that being bewildered and outlawed, that sense of groundlessness that feels somehow vitally truthful and familiar, to be very close to home, in the world we live in. He writes in “The Moon” from Bending the Bow:
….The kindling look
as if over the shimmer of the lake
his flesh radiant
.
My Lord-and-Lady Moon
upon whom
as if with love
the sun at the source of light
reflects
Lifted
Mount Shasta in snowy reverie
floats
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Worship, play, reverie…what the world is trying to be is not “trying” at all, but something far more curious and subconscious. Something like the experience of reading good poetry.
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Thursday February 25, 2010
Posted by: John Gould at 5:28PM PST on February 25, 2010

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The ecosystem of a forest balances the entwined interplay of plant, animal, insect species, down to the bacteria in soil, each finding an ecological niche to exploit, their genes co-evolving together...
How we perceive and understand all this makes the crucial difference. “The tree which moves some to tears of joy is in the eyes of others only a green thing which stands in the way," wrote the poet William Blake two centuries ago. “Some see Nature all ridicule and deformity, and some scarce see nature at all. But to the eyes of the man of imagination, Nature is Imagination itself. As a man is, so he sees.”
—Daniel Goleman, from “Ecological Intelligence,” in Psychotherapy Networker, January/February 2010
Our living room is full of poetry books, journals, criticism—and tonight, they have nothing to do with this post. Lost in an article on the intersection of brain theory and environmental science, just when I’m feeling overwhelmed by “paradigm shifts” and the evolutionary scope of the mess we’re in, there’s Blake.
These kinds of “we need a new kind of thinking” articles have a way of pissing me off—stating the obvious or previously conceived in “interesting new ways” and conveniently ignoring all of the political and social structures that have concretized the current paradigm.
At first I’m intrigued by the promise of the title, the provocative nature of the content. Then, inevitably, I am left enlightened in the same dark cell. In many ways, we think because we are conditioned to think—as a consumer, for instance.
Oh, boy--don’t let me go too far down that road. That’s literally what I was saying to myself, when poetry intervened. So how does imagination get us out of the current environmental predicaments? Maybe imagination, here, is the courage to make decisions, do things, according to a sense of duty, a basic humanness, an innate value—rather than to the prevailing values.
While we contemplate that, I’ll leave you with something from Ed Roberson (Just In: Word of Navigational Challenges, 1998):
...Even the size of a whale
I don’t see what I look directly at.
I didn’t see the pronghorn antelope,
Speed they pointed out equal our car’s,
But never having seen distance so large
I couldn’t pin in it point to antler
And saw in parallax instead the world
Entire a still brown arc of leap so like
A first look at the milky way each stone
A star I saw but could not see...
There isn’t a field of study that doesn’t, at some point, turn to poetry for inspiration, for articulation in the face of the ineffable. When things get messy, poets get the nod.
And there isn’t a volume on our shelf that doesn’t, at some point, echo the origins.
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Thursday February 18, 2010
Posted by: John Gould at 11:08PM PST on February 18, 2010
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…These desolate verb-
studded landscapes you’d
murmur, even
hiss into
some other, some ever else-
where’s
ear.
—Gustaf Sobin, from “A Self Portrait in Late Autumn,“ in In the Name of Neither
Short and sweet this week, from an exacting and language-obsessed poet—the tendrils of nature’s reach often sparse, but well defined, in his work. Defining a relationship with the land, with natural cycles, as an ever elsewhere experience.
This work is a stretch for “nature” and poetry, but there are more subtle, more complicated things going on here. Like stretching some seldom used muscles, looking at a rose, for instance:
…wherein the roses, this
morning, muscled in the folds of
their own re-
lapsing facets—
Language is front and center in Sobin’s work—be it literal in “verb-studded” hills, or in carefully constructed images like “lapsing facets.” Language, our ability to communicate, and the mysteries of the natural world are tightly interwoven.
As human beings we speak ourselves into existence. As poets, we create with words. A good pallet cleanser. A unique poetic voice.
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 9:42AM PST on February 12, 2010

Redwood. Photo courtesy John Gould.
This must be the perfect progress where
movement appears
to be a vanishing, a mending
of the visible
by the invisible—just as we
stitch the earth,
it seems to me, each time
we die, going
back under, coming back up….
It is the simplest
stitch, this going where we must,
leafing a not
unpretty pattern by default. But going
out of hunger
for small things—flies, words—going
because one’s body
goes….
Jorie Graham, from "I Watched a Snake," in The Dream of the Unified Field
Jorie Graham may or may not be “our most formidable nature poet,” as I reported in a previous post, but her insights in this book are worth multiple reads.
The simple act of watching a snake offers up, “a disconcerting creature,” a “tiny hunger, one that won’t even press the dandelions down.”
She then uses this hunger, one she is not afraid of anymore, to reconcile us with our own reptilian brains, our own yearnings and passions. The poem is redemptive, and yet light-touch in its compassion.
We are not, were not, ever
wrong. Desire
is the honest work of the body...
This is one of the best examples I know of contemplation in nature revealing, unpretentiously and unselfconsciously, something about the human animal that could only be said in poetry.
And there are many others in this volume. Salmon, “glittering past the importance of beauty.” “Another current, river of rivers, this thrilling third-act love.” Dig in and read.
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Thursday February 4, 2010
Posted by: John Gould at 10:41PM PST on February 4, 2010

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Unlike a work of literature, translation does not find itself in the center of the language forest but on the outside facing the wooded ridge; it calls into it without entering, aiming at that single spot where the echo is able to give, in its own language, the reverberation of the work in the alien one.
—Walter Benjamin, from “The Task of the Translator,” in Illuminations.
Translation is a tricky business. And I often forget that much of the poetry I enjoy reading, poetry that works for me as an entryway into foreign lands of the natural world, has been conjured up from a somewhat problematic relationship in the act setting it in the English language.
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Thursday January 28, 2010
Posted by: John Gould at 10:31PM PST on January 28, 2010

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Head for winter
in a land where rivers are frozen
roads begin to flow
on the cobblestones along the river shore
crows hatch out a series of moons
whoever awakens will know
a dream shall befall the earth
precipitating as cold morning frost
replacing the exhausted stars
the time of evil shall come to an end
and icebergs in uninterrupted succession
become a generation’s statues
—Bei Dao, from “Head for Winter,” in The August Sleepwalker
In the early 1970s, after the Cultural Revolution in China, Bei Dao became frustrated and disillusioned with the Red Guard movement.
He abandoned more direct political action and turned to his poetry—using language to question and subvert authority, ultimately choosing to live in exile.
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Thursday January 21, 2010
Posted by: John Gould at 10:47PM PST on January 21, 2010
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Link it, now you too link up what
wants to dawn with each day:
the Word star-overflown,
sea-overflowed.
To each his word.
To each the word that sang to him
when the pack snapped at his heals—
to each the word that sang to him and froze.
To it, to night, the Word
star-overflown, sea-overflowed,
to it the ensilenced Word
whose blood did not clot when a venomed tooth
pierced its syllables
—Paul Celan, from “Argumentum E Silentio,” for Renè Char, in Selected Poems and Prose of Paul Celan.
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How could I not lead off with this at some point in our ongoing conversation about nature and poetry?
Our “link” through language, through poetry, to what is wild, dangerous, overreaching our ability to understand—ineffable—it’s right there.
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Thursday January 14, 2010
Posted by: John Gould at 11:13PM PST on January 14, 2010

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I brush along the side of warm moments,
but I can’t stay there long.
I’m whistled back through space—
I crawl among the stones. Back to the here and now.
Task: to be where I am.
even when I’m in this solemn and absurd
role: I am still the place
where creation works on itself.
--Thomas Tranströmer, from “Guard Duty,” Selected Poems 1954-1956
Where ever we find ourselves, there is a nascent desire to be awake to the nature of self. Aware of our complicity with creation.
The ocean makes it simple for me. In the water, I am a tuning fork. Trees do it for my partner. My sons are at home on granite. Places resonate with internal spaces, and how we treat them reflects our own compassion, fear, delight, anger, hope.
Late on a Thursday night, I’m thankful for Tranströmer’s lines. I’m tired, sitting at the kitchen table in Oakland. Listening to sirens. And still, I feel the hum of being struck. Of being human.
I am “the place."
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: John Gould at 12:09PM PST on January 7, 2010
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The woods are lovely, dark, and deep
But I have promises to keep
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
--Robert Frost, “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening”
In the depth of winter, with the promise of the new year unfolding, I like to return to familiar things considered anew. And Jorge Luis Borges affords such an experience here, revisiting one of the most recognizable stanzas in the cannon of nature poetry.
"These lines are so perfect that we hardly think of a trick. Yet, unhappily, all literature is made of tricks," says the Argentine writer, essayist, and poet in a series of lectures collected in This Craft of Verse. "But in this case, the trick is so unobtrusive that I feel rather ashamed of myself for calling it a trick," referring to the repetition of end lines.
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Thursday December 10, 2009
Posted by: John Gould at 9:49AM PST on December 10, 2009

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Two girls discover
the secret of life
in a sudden line of
poetry….
…I love them
for finding what
I can’t find,
And for loving me
for the line I wrote,
and for forgetting it
so that
a thousand times, till death
finds them, they may
discover it again,….
-- Denise Levertov, “The Secret.” Reprinted in A General Theory of Love by Thomas Lewis, MD; Fari Amini, MD; and Richard Lannon, MD
So begins an ambitious book, already almost a decade old, by clinical psychiatrists pushing the borders of new brain science into areas once fiercely reserved for poets and philosophers.
Finding books like this lying around the house is one of the perks of living with a poet/psychology grad student. And, while I was skeptical of science attempting to find logic in a mystery (love) that seems necessarily beyond logic’s reach, the book yielded some interesting insights into the creative process, into poetry as a form of translation from one brain to another.
Bear with my over simplification. Accept the theory that the human brain is (has evolved into) a “triune” brain—and that’s an interesting and highly substantiated theory. The “reptilian brain” (the one brain reptiles have) is responsible for vital controls (mostly subconscious) like breathing, swallowing, heartbeat, and the startle reflex.
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Thursday December 3, 2009
Posted by: Tioga Jenny at 9:05PM PST on December 3, 2009

Photo courtesy John Gould.
In the fringe month I
hear the new wasps hitting the glass
they have come from
the white hem of a dead island sea
a break-through under
the sun, an advancing tendril
killing its host in
its reach into that
otherness,…
—“Species” from Tracer,
Richard Greenfield
“Greenfield traces the cracks and fissures of ordinary
life,” says Susan Howe in the back copy for this new collection from Omnidawn
Publishing.
It takes confidence and skill to navigate that rupture
without falling in. Someone with fresh chops, and an ear for the music behind
the performance. You can tell, right away, when someone has what it takes.
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Posted by: John Gould at 10:07AM PST on November 20, 2009

Photo by Andrew Lyons-Gould
Over the swamps
a wild
magnolia bud—
greenish
white
a northern
flower—
And so
we live
looking—
—William Carlos Williams, from “Perpetuum Mobile: The City,” Selected Poems, New Directions.
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The journal Ecopoetics claims a dedication to “exploring creative-critical edges between making (with an emphasis on writing) and ecology (the theory and praxis of deliberate earthlings).
Some poets I know welcome it; others see it as a glorification of colonial nature, ignoring, as one poet says, “the bulldozer in favor of the beautiful plant.”
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Posted by: Canyon Kyle at 2:38PM PST on November 13, 2009
 The newest digital collection at the University of the Pacific’s library will excite any John Muir enthusiast. The library has scanned more than 6,500 of his letters and posted them online.
Reading through the letters will give you glimpses into his personal life and conservation efforts, including his founding of the Sierra Club. The letters are both handwritten and typed. The handwritten ones are more fun to read, though, because you get to see his beautiful, fluid penmanship.
The collection isn’t really organized, but you can search for topics, letters to and from correspondents, or by date. It’s also enjoyable to just go through the collection at random, piecing together instances from his life.
The library has also made collections of Muir's photographs, drawings, and journals available online. These collections are free to view; you don’t even need a library card to access them. But beware: You could easily spend hours clicking on images, getting lost in his world.
-- by Julie Littman / photo courtesy of the National Park Service
Posted by: John Gould at 11:44PM PST on November 12, 2009

Photo by Peter Lyons-Gould
To her fair works did Nature link
The human soul that through me ran;
And much it grieved my heart to think
What man has made of man.
--William Wordsworth, quoted in this month’s Poetry by A.F. Mortitz
Poetry comes in a handy, under-sized, monthly-digestable format. It costs $3.50 at the corner smoke/magazine/chocolate shop near my office. I think it’s the cheapest thing in the store—an affordable habit.
The contents are mixed, for my taste—a little too clever (New Yorker comes to mind here) and talky—but there is always something that makes me glad I picked it up: a good translation, a profile of a new or recently deceased poet, or, in this case, a piece of criticism that, despite its flaws (see “too clever” comment above), puts the ever-challenging dilemma of individual and society front and center.
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Posted by: John Gould at 5:45PM PST on November 6, 2009

Photo courtesy Jenny Coyle.
Freedom which does not lead to fixed phases of development, representing exactly what nature once was, or will be, or could be….Freedom which merely demands its rights, the right to develop, as great Nature herself develops.
—Paul Klee, On Modern Art, Faber Paperbacks.
This freedom Klee describes is what I think is at the heart of good poetry.
Is there such a thing as a “nature poet” or even nature-based poetry? I don’t think so.
Those labels assume that we know what Nature is, and that others like human beings and the urban environment are distinctly separate.
They also assume that the content of poetry defines the deeper issues that poetry wrestles with, and the ineffable ones it intimates.
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Thursday October 29, 2009
Posted by: John Gould at 11:20PM PST on October 29, 2009

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We, the mortals, touch the metals,
the wind, the ocean shores, the stones,
knowing they will go on, inert or burning,
and I was discovering, naming all these things:
it was my destiny to love and say goodbye.
—Pablo Neruda, “XV,” Still Another Day
Nothing is more satisfying, I think, than to read an accomplished poet nearing the end of his life, with no sign of slowing down, intellectually or spiritually.
When I first read Pablo Neruda’s Still Another Day, I was struck by a poet who knew he did not have long to live, and by a body of work with no indication of backing down, or fading into the sentimental or romantic. In two days in 1969, Neruda wrote 433 verses of a sustained and fierce poem that squarely meets nature and the human condition.
Life is fleeting, and nature is both in and beyond us. Neruda gave me a profound insight, and left the mystery still intact. That’s what I want from poetry.
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Thursday October 22, 2009
Posted by: John Gould at 11:35PM PST on October 22, 2009

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…fish are starving to death in the Great Barrier Reef, the new age of extinction is / now / says the silence that precedes—you know not what / you / are entering, a time / beyond belief….
— Jorie Graham, from “Positive Feedback Loop,” Sea Change
Publishers Weekly recently called Jorie Graham, “our most formidable nature poet.”
I got mixed reviews from my poet friends on that pronouncement. And it’s not very surprising.
Poets argue. They fight. At the poets’ café in Jean Cocteau’s Orpheé, they even brawl. Our relationship to the natural world has always been problematic and open to debate.
Thoughts?
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J Gould has been exploring wild places and writing about them since age 6. He was one of the first "beach-watchers" and newsletter editors for NOAA out at Point Reyes National Seashore. He reads sporadically across the spectrum of poetry and poetics, without any discernible pattern, and toils in virtual anonymity as a poet with annual chapbooks and publications in obscure journals -- the first being Toyon at Humboldt State, where he taught and earned an MA in English. Friend J Gould here, and join the Poetry and Nature group to meet others who share your interest.
Posted by: Tioga Jenny at 11:37PM PST on October 21, 2009

Hey Trail-heads -- Birding Phil is out today, so I promised him I'd blog about our feathered friends myself. This gives me the great opportunity to make sure you know about one of the coolest-ever books from Sierra Club Books, which just so happens to be about birding.
It's called "Birding Babylon," and it's by a National Guardsman from Connecticut -- Sergeant First Class Jon Trouern-Trend -- who arrived in Iraq
for a year's posting in 2004. He'd been a birder since age 12, so when he arrived in Iraq he started looking for birds. He found them -- in surprising number and variety around Anaconda Base in the Sunni
Triangle, where he was stationed: old-world warblers near the laundry
pond, kestrels at the dump, wood pigeons by the airstrip, owls on the
cement bunkers.
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Wednesday October 14, 2009
Posted by: Tioga Jenny at 11:17PM PST on October 14, 2009
When geometric diagrams and digits
Are no longer the keys to living things…
And when light and darkness mate
Once more and make something entirely transparent,…
Then our entire twisted nature will turn
And run when a single secret word is spoken.
— Novalis, from “When Geometric Diagrams…,” Translated by Robert Bly, News of the Universe: Poems of Twofold Consciousness
Every once in a while, I haul this beleaguered Sierra Club Books volume of poetry out from the shelf—old candle wax and dog-eared pages, notes in my handwriting that don’t sound familiar.
I rediscover an old poet who has something solid to contribute to our modern understanding of the natural world.
Whether they respect Nature’s power and want to be a part of it (Whitman) or fear a source that has the power to kill us (Dickinson), all poets are nature poets. It is our relationship to the natural world, one perceived or inflicted, that defines our work, and our existence.
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Posted by: John Gould at 11:41PM PST on October 8, 2009

Photo courtesy John Gould.
There are more fish than there are leaves
on a thousand trees, and anyway the kingfisher
wasn’t born to think about it, or anything else.
When the wave snaps shut over his blue head, the water
remains water—hunger is the only story
he has ever heard in his life that he could believe.
-- Mary Oliver, “The Kingfisher,” Owls and Other Fantasies
OK, so this is an easy one. But Oliver was on my mind after last week’s entry, because she has read at the Tuolumne Poetry Festival.
About a year ago, I drove with a poet friend out to St. Mary’s College, out in the big trees, on windy roads. The hall was packed, and my friend was dubious. She is not usually one for poets with big popular followings. And definitely not sentimental.
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Posted by: Canyon Kyle at 4:12PM PST on October 8, 2009
I recently came across a blog post that took issue with a Sierra magazine article written by one of the writers of Ken Burns's new series The National Parks. The article, "Collect 'em All," was about Dayton Duncan's quest to visit all 58 national parks, and the blogger took issue with the idea that the Sierra Club would promote such an activity. So-called park bagging "leave(s) a massive carbon footprint" and is "an elitist pursuit, a game that very few can play," says Keith Goetzmann, an environmental editor at Utne Reader.
Goetzmann raises some interesting points, most notably that we should
get to know the land intimately. Better that we should acquaint ourselves with one, two, or a few parks very well than attempt to superficially survey them all in baseball-card-collector fashion.
And who could disagree? I think we might all agree with Kent Ryden, who says in Mapping the Invisible Landscape, "A sense of place results gradually and unconsciously from inhabiting a landscape over time, becoming familiar with its physical properties, accruing history within its confines." This sense comes from living on a piece of land, and from hiking the same trails over and over again. It is a worthy pursuit. But one can know the land without being married to it – intimacy in this case does not mean cutting oneself off from other vistas.
Duncan acknowledges in his article that simply passing through a park is no great feat. He quotes John Muir: "Nothing can be done well at a speed of forty miles a day. . . . Far more time should be taken." And it seems time is really the issue here. For hitting every national park in the span of one, two, or a few years would mean that you would have to travel fast and could only gain the most superficial understanding of these lands. But Duncan made his visits over the course of a half century. Surely there is enough time in five decades to experience both a sense of place in one's home, and to see the majesty of many -- if not all -- of the national's greatest treasures.
But if it is possible in a lifetime to visit all of the national parks, is it not elitist to do so? This question is a good one, and it can be asked to all people heading out into "nature." I don't think there is anything more elitist about the national parks than other lands. Yes, there is a fee to get in, but as we are reminded in Burns's film, the parks are for the people. As Duncan says in his article
these sacred places are not only to be preserved "unimpaired," but are also to be accessible to the people. They are to be shared--shared now, and also shared with the future, just as people from our past shared them with us.
The parks are a democratic concept. They are not locked up for the wealthy, but rather set aside for everyone. Of course, that does not mean that everyone visits them. I once spoke to a resident of Moab, Utah, who leads outdoor trips, and he told me that 80 percent of the schoolchildren in town had never been to Arches or Canyonlands National Park. That's a spectacular percentage, if accurate, given that Moab is a stone's throw from both parks.
Seeing many or all of the parks is not the problem; allowing schoolchildren to grow up without visiting at least one is society's failure. Watching The National Parks, and reading Duncan's article, has brought excitement to many people. They have spurred parents to think about where they would like to take their children. And perhaps the film has prompted some children ask their parents if their family could visit a park together.
We cannot ignore climate, of course, and it is reasonable to question how much we fly or drive our cars. But in the course of a lifetime, surely there are some pilgrimages worth making. For some it is a holy site in Rome or Mecca, for others the Cathedral in the Desert, and for one man, at least, it is Paka O Amerika Samoa, 7,000 miles from his home in New Hampshire.
Posted by: Canyon Kyle at 9:47AM PST on October 8, 2009
For many people who love the outdoors -- myself included -- it’s easy to separate our connection to the wild places we care about from our commitment to other environmental issues, like climate change. After all, we can burn a lot of fuel getting out to the trails. I know I can be pretty committed to public transportation and biking for most of the year, and then hit the road for an epic road trip to the Southwest so I can wander through slot canyon narrows and watch the full moon rise over graceful sandstone arches.
But the two are connected, of course. Many of us would not be so passionate about the environment if we had not been introduced to the outdoors by a parent, a teacher, or a friend. We might not be so concerned about climate change, or the plastic piling up in the Pacific, or the hundred or so other things that motivate us to work on behalf of the planet.
So we make our annual pilgrimages to landscapes that capture our imagination – much like people have done for millennia – in search of something lasting, beautiful, and perhaps sacred. And we make our shorter trips to the mountains, the seashore, and the river to connect the natural world. We follow John Muir’s advice:
Keep close to Nature's heart... and break clear away, once in awhile, and climb a mountain or spend a week in the woods. Wash your spirit clean. These places set aside and left relatively untouched by modern society might also be one of society’s greatest allies in its fight to prevent a climate catastrophe. Deforestation and other disruptions cause up to 25 percent of the emissions that cause climate change. That’s why I was interested to see that this fall the 9th World Wilderness Congress, in Yucatan, Mexico, carries the theme: “Wilderness, The Climate’s Best Ally.”
As important as small changes are to helping avert climate change, protecting our last large tracks of forests is essential to safeguarding the planet. Whether or not you can make it to the Wilderness Congress, which takes place once every four years, it’s a cool event to check out. Thinking about the Congress made me consider the connection between protected land and our warming climate.
The lands we hike on, those beautiful spots that wash your spirit clean, are also cleansing the air that is the lifeblood of the world. Perhaps we can all do a little more to protect the lands around us and also the forests of Brazil and Indonesia. Perhaps we can carpool with our friends when we head out to the trails, and also remember that we do not lead two lives but one. That we cannot separate hiking from the rest of life. Or as Muir said:
When we try to pick out anything by itself, we find it hitched to everything else in the Universe.
Posted by: John Gould at 11:08PM PST on October 2, 2009

Polly Dome Lakes area, near Tuolumne Meadows. Photo courtesy John Gould.
I LIVE IN A FALLING SHACK
I live in a falling shack
everything waiting to be tossed out
slant floor torn screens—
My neighbors ask
Why do you live like this?
The owl flies in
and perches on the table
ruffled wings and keen eye.
I say look, the wilderness enters
homes like mine.
-- Patti Trimble, co-founder of the Tuolumne Poetry Festival in Yosemite National Park. Used with permission.
They say, start where you are. So, when the Sierra Club began its current showcase of national parks, in concert with the new Ken Burns series on PBS, The National Parks: America's Best Idea, I took advantage of the fact that Yosemite is the Bay Area’s backyard wilderness and looked for poets.
My neighbor had been telling me about the Tuolumne Poetry Festival for years. About Gary Synder, Li-Young Lee, and Kay Ryan packing the readings at the old Parson’s Memorial Lodge. People peering in through the windows, attending workshops with local poets, and catching solo acoustic guitar performances by artists like Bill Horvitz (Tuolumne Songs) .
It sounds so idyllic, and now I’m sorry I didn’t listen to her prodding -- grab my sleeping bag and my chapbooks and show up at open mike. It’s a close-knit community of poets, with a unique relationship to the park -- and a venue as inspiring as any, a half-hour walk through Tuolumne Meadow in the high Sierra.
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Friday September 25, 2009
Posted by: SC Trails at 12:23AM PST on September 25, 2009
Note: Please welcome J Gould, who will be writing a thought-provoking -- and, for some of us, a poetry-provoking -- blog post each Thursday on Trails.
-- Tioga Jenny
Who Will You Carry Into the Outdoors?

Photo courtesy J Gould.
The love of books
is for children
who glimpse in them
a life to come, but
I have come
to that life and
feel uneasy
with the love of books.
This is my life,
time islanded
in poems of dwindled time….
-- Robert Hass, from “Songs to Survive the Summer,” Praise.
Robert Hass has big, meaty hands that flower around his face like a protea when he’s sitting, contemplating.
I saw him a few years back at the Sierra Summit -- waiting to address a bunch of environmentalists and read some poems. He was calm, magisterial, like you would expect from a former poet laureate.
But when Bay Area poets met at the Berkeley Art Museum this past spring -- part of an exhibit exploring the relationship between art and nature, Hass was animated, even a bit agitated. He began his introductions with an uneasy lament over the declining value we ascribe to the natural world.... (more)
Posted by: SC Trails at 11:02PM PST on August 27, 2009
Coming soon: A weekly poetry blog and a new poetry group on Trails! This post on The Big Read should whet your appetite. Stay tuned... --Tioga Jenny
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….A flight of pelicans
Is nothing lovelier to look at;
The flight of the planets is nothing nobler; all the arts lose virtue
Against the essential reality
Of creatures going about their business among the equally
Earnest elements of nature.
--Robinson Jeffers, "Boats in a Fog," The Norton Anthology of Poetry, Third Edition
If you haven't heard of The Big Read, we're happy to introduce you to a remarkable National Endowment
for the Arts program that in many cases focuses on poetry about the
natural world -- which is why Trails community members should check it
out.
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